We have been writing descriptions in Studio One. We read 'The Great White Man Eating Shark' by Margaret Mahy. We wrote descriptions of the main character Norvin. Here's what some children wrote.
Norvin The Man Eating Shark
Norvin pretends to be a great white man eating shark. Norvin wants to have the beautiful beach to himself. He has shark teeth, blue eyes, blond spiky hair, a shark pointy head and a grey dorsal fin. He has rose white skin and he's fat. Norvin tries to scare people with the grey dorsal fin and the people think he is a great white man eating shark. Norvin is a trouble maker because he doesn't let anyone in the blue water.
By Amber
Norvin The Shark
Norvin is really, really mean. He is pretending to be a shark. Norvin has a dorsal fin and his hair is golden. He likes the beach to himself. He scares everyone away. Norvin is mean to people.
By James
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